Fic: Until the end

[bee-ta-baby.livejournal.com]

Title: Until the end...

Rating: pg-13
Fandom: LOTR RPS
Author: bee_ta_babyBeta: None, so if I made a mistake... okay.             
Warnings: Death Fic
Disclaimer: I do not know these people, and this is just a wish of how things could have been...  This is all lies.
Authors note: For those who really know me, know I can't read a death fic... I can write them rarely, and this one just begged to be let out, to have a voice.

Dedication: To all who have left us, by their own choice, or because it was time. We miss you.

Brown stared into blue, watching as each emotion danced across the surface. Each held the gaze of the other, memories and lives spent together as well as apart lived between them. All their memories, loves, hurts, failures, triumphs, pain and suffering, each the same and yet different for the two.
It was minutes, hours, or only seconds that they continued to gaze at each other, showing how their love had endured for 48 years, how they became one in a world that would have kept them as two.
Brown stared into blue, watching until the blue faded into clouds and left this earth.
Brown stared into blue and repeated the same words he'd made every year on their anniversary. "This world is nothing without you." There was more this time. "I'll be with you soon my love."

He stayed there, next to the man he'd loved for nearly five decades until his brown eyes faded as well.
The end.

Comments

[tati.livejournal.com]

*sniffles* this is so sad, but actually quite beautiful as well. this is probably one of the couple of times i didn't regret reading CD

[bee-ta-baby.livejournal.com]

Thank you hon - admittedly it made me cry too... it was kind of a catharsis for me - was massively depressed and needed to get it out. That you 'felt' it too is a wonderful compliment.
*hugs*

[dreamerswings42.livejournal.com]

So heartbreakingly beautiful. Enjoyed the sniffles.

Thanks for sharing your talent.

[bee-ta-baby.livejournal.com]

wow, thank you! Really, thank you... this one just would not leave me alone, begged to be out there.. thank you for reading and responding, it means a lot

[stormatdusk.livejournal.com]

*sniffles!*

[(Anonymous)]

Awwwwwwwww *pets* thank you! *hands over tissue*

[bee-ta-baby.livejournal.com]

that was from me... didn't realize I was logged out - sorry

[stormatdusk.livejournal.com]

i figured. :)

[alliwantisanelf.livejournal.com]

I like the way you handled this. That they couldn't be without each other, that they would be together always.

Very touching, and I especially liked the way you repeated the brown eyes looking into the blue ones.

*hugs*

[bee-ta-baby.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much! It's a rare and wonderful thing when someone takes the time to really 'dissect' a story... to mention the parts they liked and at times the parts they didn't. I really do appreciate your words. *hugs* Thank you again.