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Title: Pirate Booty
Author: blurblely
Pairing: Viggorli--Viggo's POV
Disclaimer: Not true. Also, not meant to be crack despite the title (Sorry, couldn't resist).
Summary: A short poem about Viggo and Orlando at the beach
Warnings: none






Loop-de-loop smile so juicy and bright,
Soft as a tangerine.
Freckle marks he'd swear he hates,
But when I kiss them it makes him scream.

Beads of water tracing his neck,
So beautiful I forgot to breathe.
Boomerang lips finding a home in my ear,
Whispering, "Don't Leave"

Pressing, leaning, planning attack.
Loot, pillage, plunder, sack.

But I left him there,
Lying in the sand,
Crisp white shirt rucked way up high,
And I gathered the shattered remains of myself
As the sun glared down shards from the sky.

Comments

[chickenfried-jo.livejournal.com]

oh very nice. I don't usually like poetry but this hit some of my happy spots.

[blurblely.livejournal.com]

what a wonderful compliment! Thanks very much.

[chickenfried-jo.livejournal.com]

you're quite welcome.

[rifleman-s.livejournal.com]

"Pressing, leaning, planning attack.
Loot, pillage, plunder, sack."

Wow . . . what an image! :D

[stormatdusk.livejournal.com]

the first and last lines are my favorite, but i love the whole thing!