Geek!Orlando, Part 32 (Orlando/Viggo, adult)

[stormatdusk.livejournal.com]

manip made by the very sweet and generous desire_billy

title: Geek!Orlando, part 32
author: stormatdusk
pairing: Viggo/Orlando
rating: adult
warnings: m/m sex; otherwise, none
disclaimer: this is only fiction.
a/n: starts here
picks up directly from part 31
a/n 2: icon by the loving and loved galor5
a/n 3: two longish posts in eight hours! *wiggles and dances* *falls over exhausted*
a/n 4: this is for shegollum. Everyone should have a shegollum in their life. I’m so glad Baxter did.






“I think - - can we - -… we need to talk,” Orlando said unhappily.

It was really hard to know for sure without his glasses on, but Orlando thought Viggo’s face looked sort of strange.

“You want to… talk?” Viggo asked. He sounded kind of strange, too. Or maybe it was just because the bathroom was a little echo-y.

“Yeah; is that okay?” Orlando squinted. “I’ve got something I need to - - well, we should - - geez, yes. Talk. Please?”

“Yeah… sure…” Viggo murmured. “Are you - - do you want to get out?”

Orlando squint-blinked in confusion.

“Of the shower…. Do you want to get out of the shower?” Viggo asked. “So we can… talk?”

“Oh,” Orlando oh-ed. “Shoot, I didn’t think of that. I’m sort of sticky, and it feels nice. The water, I mean.” Orlando brightened a little. “Do you maybe want to get in with me?”

Viggo blinked, or at least Orlando thought it looked like he did. “In with - -… uh, okay….” Viggo skimmed out of his pajama pants and stepped into the bathtub.

Orlando smiled, carefully easing over to make room for Viggo in the spray of the shower as much as he could. Just the way Gorgeous Boyfriend Viggo’s body filled up the space with warmth and golden skin and that light mouth-watering scent made Orlando feel calmer and happier already.

But - - Viggo didn’t look… right. Now that he was so close, Orlando could see a little frown between Viggo’s eyebrows. Even when Viggo stuck his head under the spray, the water didn’t relax that little frown away. Orlando wondered if maybe Viggo had had a bad dream, too.

“Are you okay?” He stroked a warm hand down Viggo’s back.

Viggo pulled out of the spray. He nodded, slicking back his wet hair and mopping his face with both hands. He faced Orlando, blinking the water out of his eyes.

Okay, Orlando needed to just say this. If Viggo ended up with hurt feelings, Orlando would find some way to make it up to him. He would.

“Okay.” Orlando took a deep breath. “I’ve been thinking about… things. I need to tell you something, but I’m really worried that you’re going to feel bad, and I - -”

“It’s alright, Orlando,” Viggo interrupted quietly, his arms wrapped around himself. “You can just say what you need to say.”

“Um - - okay….” Orlando stammered. He could feel his cheeks heat up. “Last night - - well, it’s after midnight now, so… the other night… when we - - when I - - you know….”

Viggo looked up from the floor of the tub.

“When I - - geez, when I… topped? You know? I - - it was - - it was wonderful. It was amazing, Viggo. Really.” Orlando vaguely realized that if he did actually burst into flames from embarrassment, at least here in the shower was a good place to do it.

Viggo blinked.

“You were - - are - - just… just… well, so beautiful… and you felt - - feel - - so good… and I really, really liked it.” Geez, this was painful. Orlando could almost hear the sirens of the fire engines on their way to put out his face.

Viggo blinked.

“But I - - oh geez… I really - - I really - - don’t want to not have that other thing any more.” The words tumbled out quickly, and Orlando winced, finishing on a whisper that didn’t have a chance to be heard over the noise of the shower spray.

“What?” Viggo said.

Orlando bit his lip, laying hopeful hands on Viggo’s crossed arms. “I’m sorry, Viggo; honest, it was so, so great,” his voice spilled out of him now. “But I really don’t want to - - you know… all the time. Not because it wasn’t so great! Because it was! But - - I just so, so like - - oh god - - the other thing. You know? And I don’t want to lose that. I mean, I want to be fair to you, and I know it matters just as much what you want, but I just thought I should tell you what I was feeling….”

Orlando trailed off and squinted at Viggo. He felt a little shaky and cold, even with the steam of the shower all around him.

Viggo blinked.

“Wait,” Viggo said carefully. “Are you saying that you prefer bottoming?”

Geez, yes, that was it. Orlando thought it would be a lot easier if from now on, Viggo would just go ahead and articulate – a ha! – the stuff that Orlando was feeling. Viggo seemed to have a pretty good handle on it, and it would probably save them both a lot of time.

“Uh… yes?” Orlando blinked. Suddenly Viggo was just too far away, even though he was so near. He nudged against Viggo’s arms and they opened to admit him. He snuggled in tight against Viggo’s chest. “Yes. I really liked doing that - -topping. But I think I prefer bottoming. Not always. Just… mostly. Usually.”

Under Viggo’s slick skin, Orlando could feel Viggo’s heartbeat rabbiting away, just like his pet Netherland Dwarf’s heart used to race. Little three pound Kashi was always so cute and quiet and sweet. Well, except for that one time when Orlando stepped on her by accident, and she let out this huge nasally honking sound, sort of like a lighthouse foghorn or something. Who knew rabbits could honk?

“So that was… that’s what you wanted to tell me?” Viggo murmured, his arms tightening just a little around Orlando.

Orlando pulled back a little. “Yeah. Are you - - are you okay? Did I hurt your feelings?” He searched Viggo’s face, squinting a little out of habit.

Viggo inhaled and then exhaled such a big breath that Orlando had to grip Viggo’s shoulders a little to keep from shifting too much weight on his bad ankle.

“Orlando,” Viggo seemed to shiver. “I loved the other night. You felt amazing; you were so good, so gentle. I want to do that again, definitely.” He smiled. “But generally, I prefer topping.”

Orlando’s eyes got big. “Really? You’re not just saying that?”

Viggo nodded, and Orlando thought his eyes looked sort of wet. Well, duh; they were in the shower. Of course his eyes were wet.

Viggo liked topping! This was… this was so great!

“Oh, good!” Orlando breathed, hugging Viggo hard around his neck. “I’m so glad we can still… well - - oh, Viggo, I love the feeling of you inside me,” Orlando whispered.

Viggo was suddenly very still. “Say that… again.”

Orlando kissed the side of Viggo’s neck. “I love the feeling of you inside me,” he whispered again, this time right into Viggo’s ear.

Viggo hissed in a breath. “Again,” he demanded.

Orlando’s cock jolted awake at Viggo’s growl. “I love the feeling of you ins –”

Viggo slammed their mouths together and tried to suck out Orlando’s shyness. Or at least, that’s what it felt like.

In a very darn good way.

Suddenly the heat of Viggo’s naked, wet body pressed against him and the steamy shower pounding on them and Viggo’s mouth moving so urgently against his combined to create what must’ve been at least 16 gigs worth of adrenaline screaming around his nervous system.

Orlando sort of vibrated when he felt Viggo’s hand slide down his back and splay possessively over his butt. Viggo pressed his slippery middle finger against Orlando’s entrance and Orlando threw his head back, gasping.

“Oh god, Viggo, please!” he panted.

“God, yes,” Viggo’s voice was like a mating call, all animal and snarly. Orlando’s cock immediately put on a safari hat and rented a jeep.

Viggo slammed off the shower water and caveman-hauled Orlando out of the shower and into the bedroom, both of them soaking wet. Orlando hobbled happily with him, barely even feeling his bad ankle. He oofed sideways onto the bed, already reaching to caveman-haul Viggo down on top of him and attach their mouths again.

And there - - oh god - - Viggo’s finger was moving into him, warm and slick and thick, and Orlando gasped. After a few minutes the last of his self-control vanished, and he found himself pushing down onto Viggo’s fingers and moaning and writhing, sort of the same way Dom had reacted when the UPS guy finally delivered the LED belt buckle he’d ordered that one time.

Then - - oh god oh god - - Viggo was kneeling in front of him, sitting back on his heels, rolling on the condom and slicking it quickly. He moved into Orlando’s body, and Orlando felt the buttery slide and the exhilarating fullness and the soothing heat, and it was like… yeah, it was just…

It was just right.

Viggo leaned down to kiss Orlando, and again, and his shower-wet hair dripped onto Orlando’s chest, making little splashes that tickled. Orlando laughed when Viggo moved to lap them up. When his need overcame his giggles, he shifted his hips, impatient to feel Viggo moving into him. He let Viggo lift his calves to rest on Viggo’s shoulders, being especially careful with the sore ankle.

Viggo did move then, in long, smooth strokes, filling him, fulfilling him in a way that seemed a little bit new each time. Without thought, Orlando’s hips found Viggo’s rhythm, and he stretched and sighed. He couldn’t see Viggo as more than a blur, but he could hear his breathing, feel his hands as they slid over Orlando’s belly and chest and thighs, sense his… well, his Viggo-ness.

Viggo stopped moving, and Orlando’s eyes flew open. Viggo leaned down, his beautiful blue gaze pinning Orlando.

“Tell me again,” his breath ghosted over Orlando’s lips.

“I love the feeling of you inside me,” he whispered. Orlando stretched his neck up to meet Viggo’s mouth, licking at his lips, reaching for anything he could get.

Viggo growled and seized Orlando’s hips, hauling him onto his thighs. Orlando gasped and then cried out as Viggo began thrusting strong and fast, sending little gold jingles and jolts zipping between his cock and his brain. Orlando clutched at Viggo’s arms as he felt his orgasm nearing, babbling to Viggo and then there was - -

a rushing sound in his ears,
and Viggo pulsing inside him, gasping deep, guttural somethings,
and a white-yellow flash that Orlando thought was maybe a star going supernova.

Once Orlando had remembered he was in fact a human being and lived on a planet called Earth, he opened his eyes. Viggo was still inside him. He was crouched forward, resting his forehead on Orlando’s chest as it rose and fell in search of oxygen.

Orlando reached to stroke Viggo’s wet hair.

They cleaned up and moved to the tiny bed in Viggo’s spare room, to sleep there while Viggo’s bed dried overnight. Viggo’s arms wrapped around him more tightly than usual, it seemed, and Orlando contentedly snuggled back against him. Before he fell asleep, he made two mental notes:

1. Given tonight’s results, he was definitely going to talk to Viggo more.
2. He totally needed a new butt sign that said: Viggo, My Amazingly Nice And Gorgeous Boyfriend Who Prefers To Top, Was Here


ETA: continued here

Comments

[christa-charlie.livejournal.com]

So sweet, and so happy that this chapter was posted to relieve some of that angst!

Oh Viggo, couldn't you have said something this time? I thought for sure... it would have just been this time.. sighs!

[stormatdusk.livejournal.com]

lol - i know what you mean, but i have to laugh in a way. this fic has been so anti-angst that it makes my teeth hurt sometimes!

vig's dying to say it, but it's been such a short time.... we've been reading for months, but they've only been together 2 weeks? so he's really afraid to send orlando running for the hills. no worries; we'll get there. and soon - - there's not much left. :)

[readgreekeasy.livejournal.com]

That was wonderful, and such a quick update! Is Viggo maybe a little insistant on hearing the I LOVE the feeling of YOU inside me because he's reading his own meaning into it? mmm defiantely hot, I can't wait for more **hopes another update comes on in the next few hours but realizes that she is just getting spoiled by the oh so lovely storm**

[stormatdusk.livejournal.com]

i think you're definitely on to something with that theory. ;)

thanks so much for your encouragement; it means a ton. xo

[aflon.livejournal.com]

“God, yes,” Viggo’s voice was like a mating call, all animal and snarly. Orlando’s cock immediately put on a safari hat and rented a jeep.

Sitting here at 6.35 am with a huge grin on my face. Thank you for a great start to my day :D

[stormatdusk.livejournal.com]

aw, really? how neat! thank you for a great end to mine! :)

[not-a-lamb.livejournal.com]

"God, yes,” Viggo’s voice was like a mating call, all animal and snarly. Orlando’s cock immediately put on a safari hat and rented a jeep.

This was shockingly funny. I had to re-read it several times, just couldn't stop laughing.

JUST SAY IT! They're both feeling it, even if Orlando isn't sure what it is. I think that's his deal anyway. C'mon, Say It Viggo!

[not-a-lamb.livejournal.com]

p.s. Thanks for the lightening fast update. It made my night to read two of these at once!

[tati.livejournal.com]

wow, you're spoiling us :D absolutely loved it

[stormatdusk.livejournal.com]

thanks, hon!

[dreamerswings42.livejournal.com]

YES Another chapter and so quickly!

An especially great chapter tonight! OMG I'm laughing so hard there are tears running down my face... my fav lines... still cracks me up when I read them!!

Who knew rabbits could honk? (I guess this was funny because of what was actually happening while he was thinking about it LOL)

Orlando's cock immediately put on a safari hat and rented a jeep. (And Orlando's cock --- hmmm - It's Alive!

Thanks for great entertainment xoxoxoxo

[stormatdusk.livejournal.com]

tears? lol! and the rabbit part was true - kashi really did make this awful honk thing when i stepped on her. *shudders*

i think at this point, we officially have to call his cock its own character. ;)

thanks so much for your enthusiasm; it's great!

[dreamerswings42.livejournal.com]

Not 135 times, but how about two??? LOL xoxoxoxoxxoxo

[stormatdusk.livejournal.com]

*LOVES*

[simply-rubbish.livejournal.com]

Perfect. There's nothing else I can say really.

[simply-rubbish.livejournal.com]

Except! *lol* That LED belt buckle thing is brilliant. Orlando should wear one everywhere that says "My bum loves to bottom for Viggo" and Viggo should wear one that says "I own Orlando's ass". ;-)

[glamourworld.livejournal.com]

I LOVE this story so much and YOU for writing it. Amazing how a story can be so funny and so hot, sweet and lovely at the same time. I hope it won't be over too soon, I will miss Geek Orlando and Toasty Viggo so much. Thank you for writing such an funny little universe.

[stormatdusk.livejournal.com]

wow, what super nice things to say. i have had an amazingly fun time writing this series, and continue to be shocked by its reception. i so appreciate your warm words! thank you!

[sarkka]

I can't ever look at Keppler's the same way again =D


Love love the dorks...both of them ;)

[stormatdusk.livejournal.com]

i love them too. :) xo

[roomfor2.livejournal.com]

That could so easily have been the opportune moment for Viggo. Maybe he did say it in those guttural somethings while Orlando was coming.
I love Orlando's nervousness when he has to talk to Viggo.

[stormatdusk.livejournal.com]

Maybe he did say it in those guttural somethings

hmmmm... he just might have. or, he might have been reminding himself that his car needs it's 60,000 mile checkup soon.

nah. ;)

[ranmaru.livejournal.com]

I love you. No really. This was so wonderful, this story just seems to get better and better when it's so amazing already. Such simple language makes everything so much more real. I love your Viggo so much. *happy sigh*

[stormatdusk.livejournal.com]

seems to get better and better
oh geez, you can't know how encouraging it is to read that. i was much more comfortable in the first ten chapters than i have been since. and the 'simple language' comment? that rocked my world. i adore writing them because of that language, because it's so stream of consciousness? in a way. orlando thinks almost in a childlike way, and i just freaking love writing what he 'tells me' in the same words. if i was just a slightly bigger dork than i am, i'd be printing and framing your comment to hang on my wall. as it is, i'll just come back and read it every few hours or so. ;) thank you!

*hugs!!*

[more-hana.livejournal.com]

What a happygeekish Tuesday! It's really heartmelting again. :)
I WANT the LED buckle!!! All the item featured in this fic meets my favorite. How geeky am I?! ;p
Viggo in this chapter is adorable. Say 'I love you', Viggo!

[stormatdusk.livejournal.com]

geez, i'm sorry i missed your comment until now! thank you, as always, for reading and for commenting. xo

[peppiham.livejournal.com]

Brilliant -again,and TWO chapters together?? Made my day. This makes me laugh so much, and yet its so so sweet. You have a real talent for writing!!

[stormatdusk.livejournal.com]

thank you so much for the vote of confidence. and i'm sorry i didn't see your comment until now! just posted the next part. :)

[stormatdusk.livejournal.com]

still feels fresh and exciting

*falls over*
thank you does not cut it. seriously. but thank you.

[rosi.livejournal.com]

I'll carry the cock-in-a-safari-hat-image with me for the rest of my life. Thank you. No, really.

[stormatdusk.livejournal.com]

heh.

*kicks LJ for no notice of your comment*

[lulabel.livejournal.com]

Guh, that was hot. Growly and feral Viggo just makes parts of me go all a flutter.

And yay! New butt sign.

[stormatdusk.livejournal.com]

sheez, me too, baby. i love reading him pretty much any way, but even evil viggo rocks my world if he's a little growly and feral. ;)

sorry for the late response; i missed your comment till now.

[lottie21.livejournal.com]

Lovely. Just what I needed to read after a busy work day.
'Orlando’s cock immediately put on a safari hat and rented a jeep.'
What an image!!!!

[stormatdusk.livejournal.com]

eeee, thanks! sorry to be so late; i didn't see your comment till now. :)

[ireth06.livejournal.com]

Brave cute Orlando! He's a nervous babbler and rambler isn't he?!! ***pets the cute little bugger!***
And Viggo....come on man you know you wanna.....just tell him!!! ***pushes him in the right direction....!***

Thanks for sharing, this fic really lightens my (rainy at the moment..) day!!!

[lady-razzle.livejournal.com]

every inch perfection. every bit the perfect fic to come home to.

*love in buckets*

[stormatdusk.livejournal.com]

thanks, love. no notice from lj about your comment... but still much appreciated. :)

[feenie.livejournal.com]

YAY!! Now we just have to get Orlando to REMEMBER!!

[stormatdusk.livejournal.com]

WE SO DO! :) sorry for the late reply!

[anobtuselife.livejournal.com]

Utterly delightful! I just adore Mental Note 2 - made me laugh! :D

[stormatdusk.livejournal.com]

thanks so much. i didn't see your comment till now, but i still very much appreciate it. :)

[orli-gasm.livejournal.com]

Oh Geek!Orlando is just too cute for words! All of the side imagry with his cock have me imagining a cock, looking similar to Geek!Orlando doing all this stuff! It is both funny and disturbing... lol!

I am off to read more! Oh AND YEAH! I love OrliBottom!!!

[stormatdusk.livejournal.com]

with its own little black geek glasses, yeah? :D