Poem: Just Look At You (V/O, adult) for willowwing's birthday

[stormatdusk.livejournal.com]

title: Just Look At You
author: stormatdusk
pairing: Viggo/Orlando
disclaimer: this is only fiction
a/n: happy, happy birthday, dear willowwing. i can almost see your sweet smile and feel your fabulous hugs today. :)



i let my eyes stay greedily open, this time

and just look at you

stirring
hungry flesh answering my body's call
flushed
glowing imprint of my hand on your skin
aching
breathy rasp clutching at sanity, choking out my name
desperate
dark chocolate pleading for completion
coming
coming

sated
moist lips drawing gulps of air
mine

just look at you

Comments

[tati.livejournal.com]

this is pure love ♥

[stormatdusk.livejournal.com]

thanks. so is your icon. :)

[mywiel.livejournal.com]

Beautiful! Just a few words but yet so beautiful.

[stormatdusk.livejournal.com]

thank you for reading. :)

[stormatdusk.livejournal.com]

they're very inspirational, aren't they? :)

[maiwen05.livejournal.com]

I can't quite find the right word to describe this. Uh...wonderful...amazing...beautiful. A pefect little glimpse at a stolen moment between the boys. Great job!

[stormatdusk.livejournal.com]

so nice of you to comment. thanks; it's appreciated.