Hope everyone had a great Christmas...

[lostmyfish.livejournal.com]

and I hope you all have a happy New Year.

Title: Obvious
Author: lostmyfish
Rating: G
Pairing: Viggo, Orlando
Summary: Orlando's being his usual self.
Warning: This is my second attempt and it's unbeta-ed (would anyone be willing to beta for me? I need to be controlled because if you think this is bad...), sorry.
Disclaimer: This isn't real, I made it all up.


Dom turns around in his chair, scanning the canteen for gossip. Spotting a familiar sight, he rolls his eyes. "Just look at him."

"Brazen hussy," Bean chuckles.

"Could he be any more obvious?" Billy wonders.

Dom turns back to his companions and clears his throat, adopts a high, feminine voice. "Oh Viggo, you're so handsome, let me stroke your hair! Oh Viggo, let me feel your manly broad shoulders! Oh Viggo, kiss me! Oh-" his theatrics are cut short by a projectile bread roll.

"Oi, you wanker!" Orlando takes the seat next to him. "I do not talk like that."

"Maybe your voice isn't that high," Dom concedes, picking up the roll and tearing off a chunk. "But seriously, mate, could you be any more obvious? You're all over him."

Orlando looks stricken. "Can you blame me? He's... he's Viggo," he finishes lamely, frustrated at not finding the words.

"It's all right, lad," Bean smiles reassuringly. "It's just a crush. These things pass."

"Yeah, just a crush," Orlando echoes quietly, his face aching with the effort of returning a smile.

Comments

[melle.livejournal.com]

oh i loved this! such a sweet scene. i hope we find out what happens next! :)

[lostmyfish.livejournal.com]

Thanks :) I'm working on it. Happy 2005!

[ancabell.livejournal.com]

haha so cute, (poignant at the end though) i love it!
:) :)

[lostmyfish.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much. I love everything you write, so I'm dead chuffed to get two smiley faces from you :)

[ancabell.livejournal.com]

*blushes*
youre worth more than two smilies hey!
♥ ♥ ♥

[uinendolothen.livejournal.com]

Not bad ... definitely not bad!! Quite good, actually.

My heart broke for Orlando with that last line. Very well done :)

[lostmyfish.livejournal.com]

Thanks! I'm glad you didn't think that line was too clunky.

[uinendolothen.livejournal.com]

So glad to see that you're planning a sequel, possibly multiple sequels :)

Just read it again ... very well done, especially with so few words. You conveyed so much in that short space.

[tillie.livejournal.com]

Very cute! I think we definitely need a sequel!

[lostmyfish.livejournal.com]

Thank you! There's a sequel on the way. Actually, probably more than one sequel...

[causette.livejournal.com]

Awwwwwwww! That was so sweet :D

I hope he'll get Viggo in the end. He's such a cutie!

[causette.livejournal.com]

That icon is just the cutest thing in the world!!

I don't know who made it, I've seen several people use it and have asked some of them if they know who did it but nobody seems to know. You're welcome to use it I guess :)

[lostmyfish.livejournal.com]

Isn't he just? *stares at your icon*

Is that from the Pirates junket?

[causette.livejournal.com]

Yes that's from the July 21st 2003 L.A. PotC Press Conference :)

[crimsonsenya.livejournal.com]

Both witty and wistful! You've captured the dynamics between the fellowship members in such a short space. <3

[lostmyfish.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much, I'm glad you think so :) Happy New Year!

[tati.livejournal.com]

very cute! and i agree that it demands a sequel ;) probably involving and showing Viggo's pov. i need it just because i can't stand seeing Orli in pain *sigh*

[lostmyfish.livejournal.com]

Neither can I. At least one sequel coming up. And where's the second part of The Road Back, huh? *pokes*

[tati.livejournal.com]

yay!
and i'm typing it up as we speak ;) you know... the celebration and stuff *blushes*

[lostmyfish.livejournal.com]

Thank you thank you thank you. I'm still in need of a beta, what's your email address? Mine is lostmyfish at hotmail.co.uk

Thanks again for the offer.

[laura-iskra.livejournal.com]

that was sweet and so orlish.. what is going to happen next? please, tell us! :p

[lostmyfish.livejournal.com]

Orlish! What a brilliant word. I'm going to have to use it. Does Viggo understand Orlish? Does anybody?

You're brilliant.

Thanks for the feedback, a sequel is on the way.

[laura-iskra.livejournal.com]

I can't wait..
and of course does vig understand orlish! he's the one and only official translator :p

[lostmyfish.livejournal.com]

Thanks, glad you liked it :)

[shegollum.livejournal.com]

Mmmmm...don't know how I've missed these before. Looking now. Loved this. Love playful happy "hobbits and the manly men" scenes from NZ any time. :-)