FIC: Total Submission

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Title: Total Submission.

Author: B-witched83uk (bwitched83uk@aol.com)

Type: RPS

Rating: NC-17

Warning: PWP, toy use, BDSM, spanking,

Pairing: Viggo/Orlando

Summary: Orlando just wants to be dominated.

Disclaimer: This story is complete lies. This never happened. I do not

know these men, nor claim to. This is a work of complete fiction for your

enjoyment, I make no money from it.

Beta:

Feedback: Please Sir, I want some more.

A/N: Moraya has been kind enough to bring Queer as Folk into my life, and as a thank you I said I would write her a fic. She asked me to write her a VigOrli kink fic so I did just that. Hope you enjoy it sweety.

 

Total Submission

 

 

Orlando loved the feel of the leather cuffs on his wrist. He could feel his pulse throbbing against the tight restraints. He closed his eyes and squirmed in anticipation, trying to control his breathing as the excitement flooded his body.

The young man was kneeling on a square podium. The chains attached to the cuffs were short, forcing the top half of his body down so that his face was resting on the cool, wooden slab. He was naked and open and he loved it.

He was up on his knees so that his arse stuck up in the air, silently begging to be fucked.

"Look at you, you little whore. You’re so desperate for my cock to fill you," Viggo said from behind him. He was just standing there, watching as his young lover squirmed and mewled. Viggo hadn’t once touched him, he had simply stood watching him. Orlando knew that. Viggo knew that, and it made both their dicks hard.

"Vig, please. It hurts," Orlando whimpered helplessly. He was so excited, so desperate that his entire body throbbed and ached.

A crack came down across his buttocks and he screamed at the delicious burn spreading up his cheeks. "I told you not to talk unless I tell you to," Viggo growled from behind him.

Orlando went completely silent, biting his lower lip and panting raggedly.

"Good boy," Viggo murmured, sliding one of his fingers into Orlando’s open hole and stroking slowly over the boy’s prostate. Orlando sobbed and pushed his arse back, engulfing more of Viggo’s finger. It wasn’t enough, it wasn’t nearly enough.

When the finger was removed he heard a sucking sound as Viggo licked and sucked his finger. "You taste so good, did I ever tell you that?" Orlando didn’t say a word, he didn’t dare, not until he was told to. "Speak."

"Yes, you have." His arse was wiggling of it’s own accord, trying to tempt Viggo into fucking him.

"I love how much of a slut you are," Viggo said huskily as he stroked his own engorged cock. He only had to see Orlando this way and it made him so hard it hurt.

"Only for you," Orlando whispered, wishing he could rub his cock against something.

Another smack came down and it vibrated all the way through to his cock. "I told you not to speak. You have become quite insolent, haven’t you?" another smack came down and Orlando moaned wantonly. "Disobedient." Smack. "Defiant." Smack. "Insubordinate." Smack.

Viggo then rubbed Orlando’s back before coming back down and slipping his finger into Orlando’s hole once more. "How much do you think this hole can take, hmm? Speak."

"As much as you can give me," Orlando replied huskily. He wanted Viggo to fuck him so bad. Fuck him with anything. Break him, Tear him, he didn't care, just so long as he got fucked.

Viggo smiled and placed a kiss on one of Orlando’s red arse cheeks. He then walked over to a counter and picked up a big, black, vinyl dildo, measuring four inches wide. "As much as I can give you, huh?"

He lubed up the dildo and teased Orlando’s entrance with it, an evil smirk gracing his lips. Orlando whimpered again and tried to push back, but every time he did, Viggo moved it away. He was so desperate to beg, but he knew that would just make Viggo prolong this even more.

Finally, Viggo pushed the head of the fake cock inside Orlando and twisted it slowly. The young man on the podium cried out as a sharp pain went through him at the large intrusion. Once the pain had gone though, there was just a burn left, a delicious burn that made his dick ache.

Viggo slowly slid the large dildo inside, watching how Orlando’s puckered hole stretched around it. "Beautiful," he murmured, pushing it in as far as it would go. Once it was inside, Viggo let go of it and stood back. Orlando whined in frustration and clenched and unclenched around the toy, trying to get some more friction.

Another smack came down across his cheeks and it made the dildo inside him hit against his prostate.

"Like that don’t you, baby? Hmm? God, you’re amazing," Viggo said reaching for the dildo and pulling it all the way out so that he could push it back in again.

Viggo began fucking Orlando with the toy and watched as the young man pushed back with every thrust, desperate to take in more of the fake cock.

Viggo reached round and fisted Orlando’s cock several times, making him even harder, causing his cock to leak and quiver. The young man sobbed and fisted his hands in the chains that bound him.

Finally, the toy was removed and replaced with something even better. Viggo lubed up his cock and pushed right into Orlando’s abused hole, making them both groan. Instantly, Viggo pulled back out again and repeated this action. With every thrust he went as deep as he could go and pulled back out again so that Orlando’s hole closed around the head of his cock.

Orlando knew there were tears falling down his cheeks, tears of desperation and need.

"Tell me what you want!" Viggo instructed.

"You. Please, Viggo, fuck me, fuck me hard."

Viggo smiled lovingly and stroked Orlando’s back. "As you wish, my love."

Viggo fucked him hard and brutally. It was almost violent and it hurt them both just a little bit, enough to make it good. Viggo tore into Orladno's body and the young man pushed back, taking more of him in, hungry and feral. They were both so hard, so close and so in need of release. It didn’t take much for them to come.

Orlando came first, after several minutes of hard pounding into his arse. He came in spurts across the podium and cried out as though he were in pain.

Orlando’s arse contracted around Viggo’s cock and he bent over his boy, biting into his shoulder and came deep inside the abused body.

After a few seconds of desperate panting, Viggo removed himself from Orlando’s body and looked down to see that his young lover had fallen asleep in exhaustion. He undid Orlando’s cuffs, kissing each sore wrist, and picked up the slender body carefully. He held Orlando against him like a child and carried him upstairs to their bedroom.

Once he had placed Orlando gently down on the bed, and kissed the top of his head, he joined him. He pulled the covers up over the both of them and snuggled against Orlando’s side.

"Love you, Vig," Orlando whispered sleepily.

Viggo smiled and tightened his hold. "Love you too, my little Elf."

The End

Comments

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(Hi, I'm Janine's hands, Janine's brain has melted- think that means the story was good)

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Haha. I watched Fight Club last night and in it he kept saying this like "I am Jack's cold sweat"
You sound like him.
I'm going to take your mental melt down as a compliment :)