Sight Unseen (06)

[okinay.livejournal.com]

Sight Unseen (06) by okinay
Pairing: Vig/Orli
Rating: NC17
Betas: piedpiperme & arieltachna
Disclaimer: Ever heard the song 'Cotton Eyed Joe'? It's all BULLSHIT!
Summary: An accidental wrong number changes the course of two men's lives.



Previous Chapters

Chapter 6

Comments

[rocketbalm.livejournal.com]

I just said it over in VOLA but thought I'd just tell you here as well how amazing this chapter is. nervous and vulnerable Viggo paired with Orli being a little shit and not knowing how to stop -- perfect. And the smile, I'll be surprised if Viggo can cut his own meat after a genuine Orli grin...

Can't wait until they finish dinner.
thanks and cheers, rb

[okinay.livejournal.com]

I think Orlando's reaction is appropriate, because he WAS lied to, regardless of Viggo's true identity. Hang in there to see how the rest of the evening goes.

[rocketbalm.livejournal.com]

Absolutely! I think Orli reacted very appropriately. You did an amazing job with having his little voice telling him he was being a shit and being told to shut up -- it's so true, that little battle each of us have within ourselves. Very real writing. Lovely. So enjoying this.

[okinay.livejournal.com]

*grins* Glad you're enjoying it!