Be My . . . 5/13

[raptureinbloom.livejournal.com]

Title: Be My . . .
Author: Lisa
Rating:NC-17
Pairing:
OB/VM
Summary: Orlando and Viggo learn to be together and apart
Feedback:
Yes Please

Disclaimer: we wish

Warnings:  M/M sex, angst, and as I was reminded by a friend the ending
tends to make people bawl.  I refuse to say this is a "deathfic" because that's
not what it's about at all.  It's defintely a love story.  And there's always an
end to every story.



Chapter 5

Comments

[chincoteague.livejournal.com]

All I can say is that I am loving this story and can't wait for new chapters. You are doing a great job of creating tension between Viggo and Orlando. Most importantly, you are writing Orlando in a completely different way than anyone has done before - truly like a whore. Now, I doubt that he is, but to write him that way is truly an idea of genius.

♥

and you said 'kiss Orlando'...Nah, wanna kiss Viggo. ;)

[raptureinbloom.livejournal.com]

Thank you. Orlando is really quite a bit different than he appears. He's hiding and he looks very bad.
Yeah, Viggo needs kisses right now.