FIC: Cracks in the Pavement Ch 10

[lenalove.livejournal.com]

 
Rating: Eventual NC17

Pairing: Viggo/Orlando (of course), Dom/Billy implied, cameo by Sean Bean.  
Summary: American artist Viggo Mortensen gets lost on a trip to London and finds help in the form of Orlando, a handsome young shop worker from the wrong side of the Thames. Intrigued and charmed by the Englishman, Viggo vows to learn more about this kid with a smile on his face and pain in his eyes.  Maybe Orlando is the one who needs rescuing but when Viggo vows to do what he can to help, the question is, will Orlando let him? 

Feedback: Please. It feeds the muses.

Another angsty chapter, but it will get better soon. Promise. 

Loving the new layout here. :D

Chapter 10

Comments

GR8

[(Anonymous)]

Fan-bloody-tastic sweetie. This fic is fast becomming my fav vigorli ever and believe my i've read a fair few. I swear i'm falling in love with orli all over again. You my dear are an amazing writer with sooooo much depth and emotion in this fic. Please, please, please hurry with an update and thanks soooo much darling xxxxxxxx

[mistry89.livejournal.com]

What a fabulous story - just read it in one swell foop and can't wait to read more. I'm sure that as much as Viggo wants to help Orlando, Orlando's sense of independence needs to assert itself (although this last revelation about his back is a shocker - I was hoping for far better news).
Thank you!

Re: GR8

[lenalove.livejournal.com]

Ooh, I got an anonymous comment. :D I feel I know you though...is that Jackie? Anyway, thanks for the lovely compliments. *hugs*

[lenalove.livejournal.com]

Swell Foop? I love it! LOL

Thanks hun, it is bad a the moment, but it will get better...eventually. :D *hugs*

Re: GR8

[(Anonymous)]

Hi Louby my name is Annie, I just felt I had to comment on your superb writing skills. Vigorli is my all time fav and i've been reading these fics for years. I just looooove the way you write, you've got SOME talent there girl. Pleeease keep updating this amazing fic. Your Orli is such a fantastic character with so many different layers. Once again WELL DONE DARLING. xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx