vigorli | FanFiction Feedback Day!

I posted this once before, but thought I'd give it a shot and post it again. I hope to get some feedback (good, constructive, whatever...)

Missing you (1/3)
Pairing: Vigorli (w/various pairings down the line)
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Orlando & Viggo meet up in a hotel room.
Archive: MY LJ and MOMEfics
Disclaimer: Don't know any of these guys... dammit I wish I did, but I don't. This is all made up in my dirty little mind. :oD
Feedback would be MUCH Appreciated!!!

Note: This started out being 4 parts, but I decided to leave off after 3. Let me know what you think.

Missing You (1/3)